Hello,
I will post this on the official free fiction friday page when it comes to my time to promote the giveaway, but it’s already open, so I thought I might as well show you now. It’s at the end of this rather short email.
What follows is the first poem ever written about the Atanattat, those spiderlike aliens which Lax Morales is a member of.
His older brother, Scohhrin, was going to be the spider beast in this poem.
This poem was one of the first instances where I used square brackets to add invasions of backstory or new tracks. The intention was to have these bits unread on stage, so the poems would grow if people bought the books. the line “eyes turned the blue of the sky” has been added in 2021 to further the link between this arachnid priest and Lax Morales. Reading it back, this one might also explain where the idea of the brain spiders came from.
As you can see, all my stories, poems, and jokes, have a shared multiverse.
This isn’t something you need to care about (every piece works on its own) but if you’re a bit of a geek, like me, you’ll love digging up these links.
Echoes on Silk
In a small rural town, four hundred years away an arachnid priest had inherited the position of leader, shepherd [their previous leader now buried] he scuttled his way up the brickwork down through a hole in the roof a knocked slate, fallen, would never be questioned. Extra legs tucked in under boots their fibrous ethereal forms tautened into something human a bipedal lie, mandibles secreted under impressive sideburns eyes turned the blue of the sky silken trousers and silken robe empty minds willing to receive hands cupped to gather the words he spat from the altar people pouring sound into open heads vestigial third eyes closed he offered truths they had never heard before stories of heroes, saints recycled the web he wove [so complicated] stretched from brain to brain liquid silk congealing a network of lies loosely hung all leading to the nucleus the golden bell atop the church ringing out every weekend to drag them back in the echoes on the membrane [like the wail of a violin] shrill, calming, lulling them into unconsciousness he gave them faith, in return they fixed the roof, kept him fed, gave him bodies only clothes were buried, the skin for him, the gold for sale one quiet winter night his web spun, the silk thick he climbed to the bell, worshipped himself a victim wriggled free below the scratching of human claws on stone turned him the stairs had grown cold, his webs fat with condensation he slipped eight legs split from the robes, he fell down the tower the bell cried as his weight tugged at it the boy and the girl saw his writhing mass, screamed a vibration in air enough to wobble the fibre, to alter the resonance the priest unravelled to the floor, hissed at the children, mandibles in the dark but brick dust had been loosened, the bell released from its perch one last resonant hum before the fall and the descent pulled the network tight tearing minds filled with silken lies across the province eyes torn from their sockets, ears shattered, tongues stretched the web pulled further, dragging them in through the top and the people appeared, piling in a congregation around a web of cracks the bell dented, leaning into tiles eight broken legs twitched from underneath silk [cut by the impact] faded away freedom until the next spider descended
Let me know what you think. This was very popular in 2015, and I haven’t really shown anyone since.
And here’s the FFF. Posting the link early here as a bonus feature for anyone who follows me here at RealPhillipCarter.
https://books.bookfunnel.com/free_books_friday_freebies/l4wi8r6j9v
Looking back it's pretty obvious I'd later be writing goth lyrics for people