Hello all.
Before we begin, I just wanted to let you all know that my next post is going to be a big reveal about the book SEVEN STORIES ABOUT TIME TRAVEL and it has a paywall in the middle which leads to behind-the-scenes content, dark comedy, and spoilers. I wanted you all to be able to peer over that paywall, so I’ve given everybody a week’s free trial starting about six hours ago. That way you can see how you feel about the paid content and help me refine it.
I’ll be adding more behind-the-scenes content to my stories and poems in the future, as well as writing advice and publishing tips that correspond to what I’m writing. The idea is to add value, not arbitrarily slap paywalls down. One upcoming post is going to be about how to make time travel entertaining. Another idea is to post my concept art for the stories, which I have never done before. I’m also thinking about paid subscriber contests. Basically, I have a lot of ideas and I’m looking forward to finding which ones work.
This post has a paywall right after the poems which dives into my philosophy about the poems, and how I think meme culture is going to eventually eat spoken word poetry. It’s also got a few dark jokes. You can hop right over that paywall this week and see what you think about it.
Anyway, poems.
Texture (15/10/2022)
Cruising over the lined pages of tarmac
The brain says blue green blue and casts the colour
Into each ear where it spirals into reality
The unseen collapsing into the seen
And a brown sort of feeling envelops vibrating legs
As the car trundles onward
Then it’s gone, a blip of yellow
Before another green flattens out and shifts underneath
a party trick in reverse
and again onto textured surface
it rises from the bridge of the nose and diagonally into eye sockets
where it should be cold and white
where it whirrs into a whistling vortex
blue yellow blue green blue
where it spins into reality and leaves again
clouding the mind with sense experience
Brain
Naughty brains get sent to the vacuous room
where fluorescent tube and off-white walls scrap against cork
and trains screech-stop, sending their violent waves crashing
if you want to leave, you’ll have to tell us what the woman on TV says
in her inescapable drawl, the endless accented speech
labyrinthine in its highs and lows, the words feel split in their middles
and glued back together back to front
don’t ask for subtitles, they’ll think you weren’t listening
when listening is a picking apart of this sound-puzzle
they’ll think you were putting your own one together
deep in your head, in that alien head of yours
and the lights are too bright for you to hear
and the room is too smelly for you to remember the homework
and the teacher’s shrill voice cuts into your marrow
and the kid behind you is listening to shit music
on shit speakers, echoing like someone pissing into a pile of cans
filled with wasps, and each wasp is singing a song you don’t like
and the room is too cold, so everything is too bright
and it’s a feedback loop
and Mister Carter, weren’t you paying attention last time?
Naughty brains get sent to the vacuous room
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